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Godilocks and the three bears

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Goldilocks and the three bears

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I choose Goldilocks and the three bears because it is easy and it is a good story that people know and think of it and when people read it to ever.

About the morale in Goldilocks it is Never leave the house all opone .

Once upon a time there is  a girl named Goldilocks she lives near a large forest .Her mother told her to go and pick some flower for her ,and so she went of to go and pick some flowers for her mother . When she picked up a beautiful rose. She looked around and there was a cottage and the end of a very strange path , so she wondered if to that strange looking house that had three of everything .She peeked into the window and saw three bowls ,three chairs,three beds.When she looked inside the house she noticed 3 chairs, one was too hard. Then she tried the second one and it was too squishy. After that she tried the last one and it was perfect.By this stage Goldilocks was getting hungry, she saw 3 bowls of porridge on the table, so she tried the first bowl and it was too hot. Then she tried the second bowl and it was too cold. Finally she tried the last bowl and guess what? it was just right for her (not to hot and not to cold).

Then she was tired and went upstairs to have asleep .First she tried daddy bears bed and it was too big. Then she tried mummy bears bed and it was too soft.After that she tried baby bear bed and it was perfect too. So after she tried everything she soon went fast asleep .

The morale is never go into someone else’s Home.

I could see me in the story and my dog how act’s like  a fox  so  would relate it to my life.

GirlZ Rock (Snowball Attack).

Title:GirlZ Rock

Author:Jacqueline Arena

Characters (Rachel and Elie, Best friends(BFF), Snowballs, when they weren't paying attention ):

Setting (The story was set outside of their house. They called each other and the Elie went to Rachel’s house.

What was the  problem? Spat! On their backs. The problem is when they got attacked by their neighbors

What was the solution?Yeah I’m ready to chill out big time.

Was there a plot twist? When they got slap on the back.

My favourite part of the book was?My Favourite part is when Rachel said she was going to make a snow angel .

If I could change the ending it would end like this? I would put more Information in it.

I read this book again? Yes I would cause I love hearing story’s made from other people.

Illustrate your favourite scene in the story. (Tux Paint)

The man who went to discover Antartcica

Once there lived a man who was traveling to the  coldest place in the world to see what it would look like so one day morning he packed his bags and went to the airport I am going to Antarctica he said to himself I  to see what it will be like he said to his friend jacob bue jacob bue sam .

So then he was on his way on the plane he went he waved just in case ,soon they were up up and away in the clouds hhhhaaaarrrryy he said I am going to see what it would be like in Antarctica  wooohhhoo .Then he got of the plane .

I want to come back again he said so he traveled around Antarctica He felt terrified about being there because he only had a tent , blow up bed and warm clothes on him when he was tired he put everything down and made his bed and went to sleep he said to himself what a day I had today.

Tomorrow it will be a extreme day because I want to try and discover where the animals live around here ,so of he went to discover around Antarctica  when he found were the animals all live .He thought to himself about taking some photos of them and so he ,He stayed for three day’s ,and on the last day he went home ,when he went home he told his friend next time I go you should come with me.

Scientific News

Sanctificat News by Ata,Ofa,Alarzae and Kevine from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
This is a video we made in the green screen room.

Pt England News

Pt England News from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Hello my name is Alarzae and me and and some of my friends cheek this out.

My Wale paragrph.

Wales are the biggest animals in the  world and they live in the oceans and they use their flippers to steer.They are anonymous and they have big jaw bonds to eat lots of food and they are very powerful.The Wales have streamlines and big blubber around them.