This is about my story that is about a strange looking farm

Once upon a time there lived a man who lived with his wife Rachel  and her Husband Mike they ,owned  a farm that looked really strange to them they said to them self I wonder how used to live here because , it really looked like it could use a tidy up so they started to giving everything away.

Then the next day , out of nowhere they suddenly saw a  big barn and on there hard and said who but this here!

So they went to find out who but the big barn there ,they went to the manager and said who put that big barn at back of  our hard!

“Wait said  the manager of the council down in Hamilton I put that there so it could look like a farm “. They were really excited that they had that on their farm. So they went  of home and started to clean it up a little bit.

Yayy! we finished cleaning the shed so they made sure they made it polished

for a manager Sue ,Sue was really happy but when she got the it really boring it was just a big junk she was looking at but when she went into the shed it was Beautiful,”Sue said it is a 10 out of 10 ,Great work use two”, Thank You sue ,Said Rachel and Mike.

Wait isn't that working any more?” What said Mike the fan “ “What were “ . “I’m just kidding why isn’t it working said sue”.No dose work said Rachel”.

AND THEY ALL LIVED HAPPY LIVES!

This is an unedited work about a plane

Sally is the mum of Milly , Marshall and John is the husband ,so they are one big family and they have a dog named mikey.One day there parents went of to bue very strange tickets that were a surprise for all of them because it was John and Marshall birthday.

Marshall “ said Milly you forgot to get dad , “I know said  Marshall” his busy with mum helping her pack our stuff said Marshall. I need to go and tell dad something because it is important for him to know ,

Milly said if you go can i have a turn on your laptop ,Yes said Marshall,go ahead and have a turn but do not do anything md all else your well get in big ,big trouble.But as soon as he left milly she didn’t know what she wanted to go on .But when she found something to go on she said to herself i want to go on paint ,so she went on paint and had done something very terrible ,well she didn’t know because she was only 6 years old .

When they packed everything they were very soon on there way to the airport and when they put ther hey got on the plane it was time to fly to samoa and when we get there we can have a good look around and .